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A Perishing Soul

A Perishing Soul Warrior fell with desperate woe pride wounded or innocent hurt missed the play but never the show Warrior fell with desperate woe dying quickly he does not know prayers offered but so very curt Warrior fell with desperate woe pride wounded or innocent hurt 08/10/2014 Zeugma/Triolet contest entry..

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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/2/2014 5:07:00 PM
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Thank you for participating in my contest..I am sorry to be so long in saying my congrats to each one..I enjoyed reading this one..Sara
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/21/2014 3:48:00 PM
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Like your take on this contest, Robert. It makes us reflect on the bitterness of war and those who make it happen or who become its victims. Congrats on your win in Sara's contest. // paul
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 8/11/2014 11:13:00 AM
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stunning creation, robert.. i'm still thinking of a concept for sara... great work.. huggs
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/11/2014 7:42:00 PM
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I know you will do very well when you give it a go my friend. It is quite challenging to write in.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/11/2014 9:23:00 AM
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I suspect this will do very well Robert.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/11/2014 9:41:00 AM
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Thanks Richard. I found writing in that form to be a very good challenge. Hope it does well.
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 8/11/2014 7:18:00 AM
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Brilliant write, i love the line pride wounded and innocent hurt, Robert
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/11/2014 9:39:00 AM
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Thanks Dr. Ram. This form is challenging to write in..
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/11/2014 2:35:00 AM
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Excellent pen Robert! Feelings of pride of a warrior if hurt will truly perish the soul ! God bless the brave! Gl in contest !
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/11/2014 9:38:00 AM
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Thanks much my friend. A new form for me to write in.

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