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A Perfect Day

Some days are almost crystalline in the memory: they shine like diamonds in the blue perspective of the distant past. winter wind a broken branch lit by gray-green lichens New Year's day,1981, was like that. I spent the day with my future wife, Joyce, wandering around the Eno River in the Piedmont of North Carolina. The weather was perfect for January in the South— clear with a pale, yellow sun and temperatures in the mid-50s. Chilly but pleasant. We explored the oak and maple forests bordering the river, admiring its stark, wintry beauty, and happy with each others' middle-aged company. We pointed out birds' nests and the occasional larger, leafy squirrel's homes in the bare boughs. Always, the river was a strong background presence, winding through stone outcroppings and sandy shores. winter evening at home with stars First published in Contemporary Haibun Online

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Date: 3/14/2015 9:38:00 PM
A love your descriptive write a 7 ++. I love the outdoors of nature. Blessings eve
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Thomas Martin
Date: 3/18/2015 9:51:00 AM
Hi Eve, Many thanks for your comment. Hope to read more of your work! Tom

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