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A Penny On the Sidewalk

He stepped out of his car and rummaged in his pocket for some coins to feed the meter. As he stepped up on the sidewalk, he noticed a penny lying near his feet. He briefly contemplated picking it up before dismissing it. It was just a penny. It's value hardly worth the effort. As he stood there, he heard a voice say “Sir, could you spare some change to help me out?”. He turned to see an unkempt man, languishing on the stoop of a vacant store. He held a cardboard sign on which was scrawled “Homeless, Can You Help, God Bless You” . He looked bad, and, as the man walked closer, he noted he emitted an unpleasant odor as well. His first thought was just to walk away, reasoning that if he gave him anything, he would probably just buy some liquor and drink himself to sleep. But he did not. There was something about the man that held his gaze. Instead he spoke to the man saying “the uniform jacket you're wearing says Walker over the pocket. Is that you?” “Yes” the man replied. “That's me”. “Are you a vet Walker” the man asked. Again the man answered “yes sir”. “How did you end up here” the man questioned. Walker dropped his head, then looking up he said “I got some things I can't forget. They drive me crazy sometimes and I do stupid things. Caused me to lose everything. It's my fault, but that doesn't change anything, they are just as gone.” The man reached in his pocket and withdrew a twenty dollar bill. As he offered it to Walker he asked “Will this help soldier?”. “Oh yes sir, thank you sir, and God bless you” he replied. The man turned to walk away, and as he did, he thought about how, in just a matter of minutes, his opinion of the man had changed from one of disdain to one of compassion. That was a real person sitting there, perhaps even a hero. He had a name. He had an identity. Under different circumstances, each could have walked in the others shoes. He had no idea what Walker would do with the money, but it didn't matter now. In his mind he knew he had found another penny on the sidewalk. But this time, without regard for value, he had stopped and picked it up.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/7/2012 7:43:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this wonderful story, Bob! Love, Kim
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/7/2012 10:45:00 PM
Thank you Kim
Date: 2/7/2012 12:05:00 PM
Congrats on your win, thoughtful poem..... George
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/7/2012 1:23:00 PM
Appreciate it George
Date: 2/7/2012 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your placement in P.D's "Any Poem You Posted This Week" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/7/2012 1:23:00 PM
Thank you Carol
Date: 2/6/2012 9:04:00 PM
Bob, congrats... on your wonderful win.. thank you for your support ;-)' always PD
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/6/2012 10:36:00 PM
And my thanks to you
Date: 2/6/2012 8:37:00 PM
Bob, very nice write. I really enjoyed reading it and congrats on a well deserved win..............S.Ronthorpe
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/6/2012 10:36:00 PM
Many thanks Samual
Date: 2/6/2012 5:38:00 PM
congrats Bob on another sensational win for this dynamic write.. ultra fine..luv..
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/6/2012 10:37:00 PM
Appreciate it Linda-Marie
Date: 2/6/2012 3:30:00 PM
2 quick to pass the other class, the ones out on the street, which could be me ....not so sweet.... i only channel the poetry mate, sometimes its deeper than i think:(
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/6/2012 10:39:00 PM
Whatever it is Don, keep doing it
Date: 2/6/2012 1:32:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this great tale today..Yes, sometimes we need to stop and look at things from a different perspective..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/6/2012 2:45:00 PM
So true Sara. Thanks for stopping by
Date: 2/6/2012 11:44:00 AM
Bob congrats on your very fine win..David
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/6/2012 2:44:00 PM
Thanks Dave
Date: 2/6/2012 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Bob, love Elizabeth
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/6/2012 10:52:00 AM
Thank you Elizabeth
Date: 2/6/2012 9:17:00 AM
Wow!!! Such a deep provoking poem, here! I love every paragraphs u have here, Bob. Thanks for sharing, and congrats on your win. You got my 7 :)
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/6/2012 10:53:00 AM
You're very kind Dinda. Thank you
Date: 2/6/2012 8:27:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/6/2012 10:53:00 AM
Thanks Christopher
Date: 2/6/2012 8:09:00 AM
Sentimental narrative! that poor man! I think sometimes we forget to look at the person inside the homeless facade. so tragic! but your story is very uplifting :) Congrats on your win!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/6/2012 10:54:00 AM
Thank you for your comments Susan
Date: 2/6/2012 4:37:00 AM
Nice one Bob congratulations xx
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/6/2012 10:55:00 AM
Thanks Mandy
Date: 1/27/2012 9:30:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poem this morning Bob. This week has flown by for me. I hope you enjoy your weekend and find the inspiration to write some more during this time. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/27/2012 9:34:00 AM
Thank you Carol
Date: 1/26/2012 11:45:00 PM
This was a very touching story. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/27/2012 8:31:00 AM
Glad you liked it Bob. Thanks for taking the time to comment.

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