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A Peaceful Feeling

Today I wear a necklace with Billy's picture in it
And I feel no longer alone when I go about my life
For he is with me now for all the world to see.

I had an appointment to see about buying a mobile home
And as we talked getting acquainted 
I mentioned reading my books
This young man was very excited.

And as I gave the story of my COWBOY AND ME
His eyes they did shine urgeing me on
For he had shared with me 
He and his wife were to have a baby soon

He reached over and touched Billy's picture
And said, he had just mentioned to his wife
How often, couples married for years, 
Tended to resemble one another

It was something I had never considered about us
But when I got home and looked closer 
It was the truth I found.

As I look in the mirrow
I don't know if I should feel sorry for Billy or not
For you see it gives me a plesant feeling

He is still here with me, for I have gotten signs
And the words we recited 'UNTIL DEATH WE DO PART'
Should have been 'FOR ALL ETERNITY' AMEN

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  1. Date: 2/1/2012 5:59:00 AM
    I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Cile. Love and best wishes always, Carol

  1. Date: 12/11/2009 12:39:00 PM
    Been too long since you've posted such beautiful writing here, Cile ... hope you return soon. Have a wonderful holiday and may 2010 be a great year for your and yours !!

  1. Date: 3/15/2009 4:52:00 AM
    I am discovering a vast land of spiritual richness, I had known before, God's own hand on my faith led me to this door. I am inspired more. Thanks.

  1. Date: 10/4/2008 6:29:00 PM
    Cile, difficult to lose the man you love, but it is true that he is with you and always will be in the folds of your memory to ponder and remember those wonderful times, laughter and tears and all things we hold dear. God bless you. Diana

  1. Date: 8/5/2008 2:06:00 PM
    love filled and intimate and conversational

  1. Date: 8/1/2008 9:05:00 AM
    great write my friend you keep on wearing that necklace of billy bet he is just gleaming in heaven knowing you had not forgotten him can you please send me your mailing address for I would like to send you a copy of my cd with both of my songs for you to listen to 1 is a xmas one and 1 is a summer one will mail it out right away just need your address to send it on to you thanks dear friend for sharing keep up the great writting hugs

  1. Date: 7/24/2008 10:20:00 AM
    How touching, and a wonderful gesture of holding on to your past love. I can almost picture the locket. Very nice job on this. Love and hope for you, Ivy

  1. Date: 7/24/2008 6:55:00 AM
    Yours is love story that Dale and Roy would have been jealous of. Beautiful write. Who knows what the next part of the journey will bring. God Bless. Vince

  1. Date: 7/16/2008 7:39:00 AM
    Hi Cile! This was so beautiful, I missed reading your poems, especially ones you write with your Cowboy in mind. This was so special and touched my heart. You're such a beautiful soul, and I'm so glad you have such an awesome story. Blessings, ~Michaela~

  1. Date: 7/15/2008 11:15:00 AM
    Nothing like a good man to inspire a poem. Sweet tribute to Billy. You will be reunited. Anne-Marie Christine

  1. Date: 7/14/2008 8:34:00 PM
    Cile, you were so lucky to have a loving spouse, no not lucky, Blessed. Your loss is a sad thing, but those good memories no one can ever take from you. Your love is still strong and it shines like a beacon in the night, God bless you my friend, Ron

  1. Date: 7/14/2008 12:54:00 PM
    Cile you know how I feel about you in my heart - You are perhaps the most beautiful soul I have ever met - You are like a mother in my heart and my prayers are for you daily - I can't imagine living without Toni but when I try my heart bleeds for you - I love you dearly Cile

  1. Date: 7/14/2008 12:43:00 PM
    Touching poem about life matters well done Love and peace Laura

  1. Date: 7/14/2008 11:43:00 AM
    this was a very moving piece of poetry. yes true love never leaves us, we take it to the grave.

  1. Date: 7/14/2008 11:26:00 AM
    Hi Dear Love always stays with us it never dies. We keep it with us here on the earth and we take it with us when we go. What a beautiful enduring soulful spiritual embrace....Very peaceful in the knowing. Love Light Truth Patricia PS Your beautiful spirit uplifts us all you know that! Take care hun.

  1. Date: 7/14/2008 11:04:00 AM
    I believe true love is eternal, and I think those words 'until death do us part' should be changed. I would love it if you wrote a poem about some of those signs. I believe too Cile. Amen is right. Beautiful. Love, Shar