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Vultures surround me, glaring at my ebony“ unsaved Soul“, Squawking, waiting for the "Feast of Death" The Sallow Sky envelopes me, destroying all thoughts of Eternity , a Love tear falls with-in my last Breath Where are the Stars, the Moon, the Sun, LIFE? : I stand alone scarred and scared ; “I want to go Home" See the glory of Mother Nature, touch the Robe of Father Time : To Write myself out of this Horrible Poem Inspired By the POEM “ If you can’t be a poet, be the POEM “ By Dr. Ram Mehta Dedicated To “ Dr. Ram Mehta “ ( My Literary Advisor) through His Comments to my Work

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Date: 6/6/2018 6:33:00 AM
Engaging intriguing ink HG. I am a bird lover, birds do tend to proliferate my writing, one day I will fly away into one of my own poems. xomo
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Date: 6/6/2018 6:30:00 AM
Chef Harry...this max-intense poem captures thoughts I understand...the calling out to the universe feeling betrayed yet seeking this same natural world for redemption...I don't tell many people I nearly passed out from fatigue this early Spring in Wisconsin Bluffs digging Ramps ordered by 4 Executive Chefs I know with eager patrons... had to hike couple miles into forest, dig, then backpack it out...good $$ but not sure worth it, but did see this darling Spotted Fawn hiding a foot away!
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