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A Path Covered

Tunnel vision in the night... Left alone with breathless sight... Touched with tears that refuse to dry... Hidden fears that just won't fly... Scars that sit under my skin... I'm ankle high in a stream of sins... The path surrounds my dreams of faith... With a fork in the road that keeps me staight...

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M.I.A .

Date: 1/21/2012 1:47:00 AM

Definitely a winner! desires and helplessness that just brings chill to the bone. great write Michael

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/18/2012 4:44:00 PM

very well done and not an emotion and thought left unturned. Easy to see why this is the grand winner,Michael . Congratulations to you

Sarah Mullan

Date: 1/18/2012 1:43:00 PM

congrats on your winning Micheal. Love, Sarah.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/18/2012 10:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your top notch win Michael. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/18/2012 8:25:00 AM

a real killer of a piece, michael.. congrats on the high win with huggs! :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/18/2012 5:58:00 AM

Congratulations Michael x

David Williams

Date: 1/18/2012 2:53:00 AM

Michael congrats on your win,superb writing, wonderful reading..David

Sadaf Syed

Date: 1/17/2012 9:22:00 PM

A very beautiful description of the path.congrats on your win:)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/17/2012 8:59:00 PM

A gorgeous poem, Michael..It love the second stanza where u are ankle high in sin...just fabulous lines here. Congrats..you really stole the show..enjoyed immensely. Gwendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/17/2012 6:15:00 PM

congrats Michael luv on another grand first place victory.. a special creative write but I luv them all.. as charming as my WK ..JG forever and always xoxoxoxoxoxo..and more too..oh..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/17/2012 5:44:00 PM

makes one think..how does the fork keep you straight? Congrad's Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2012 5:27:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/17/2012 4:29:00 PM

So much between the lines of this introspective poem! Congratulations, Michael!

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 1/17/2012 3:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Michael, wonderful poem. Elizabeth

Bob Quigley

Date: 1/17/2012 2:29:00 PM

Congratulations on grabbing the podium Michael. Well done

Dinda Minardi

Date: 1/17/2012 10:26:00 AM

touched with fears that refuse to die.. just excellent dear friend :) have a great day, Michael.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/16/2012 11:50:00 PM

Michael, i'm finally on vacation... no more sneaking on the soup...lol... from my own restaurant... gosh i miss it here... 20 minutes here and there are not enough... anways,, about your poem... it's beyond perfect... i like that line~ Hidden fears that just won't fly~~ how do you do it... did you know i had a bad case of writers block... well always up for the inspiration.. and the magic of your words.. and believe me it's like home when i read your words..always yours trully..p.d.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/15/2012 7:36:00 AM

so glad to be the second to comment here,michael.. a moving piece that is free flowing and presented like an internal musing "Left alone with breathless sight"... lovely! :) huggs!