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A Passionate Soul

Everything is done with the whole of your heart Each part of you cries out and yet you remain unheard You push onward often only to find a dead end Tired, empty, and misunderstood you continue Determined to make everything work, to make everything last Your spirit is engulfed, weakened, and flooded with tears Yet you do not give up, you must not fail Labels and insults surround you, you are crazy or eccentric No one knows the real you, yet you must go on Lost in a world of so much promise Your emotions lead you, twisting, entangling, and choking You are captive, a prisoner within yourself, bound by desire Begging to escape, to find peace and happiness The problem with passion is it burns an eternal flame Never to be extinguished Therefore it can burn the soul leaving its victim in pain Copyright © 2009 Lena “Lolita” Townsend

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Date: 11/23/2009 7:40:00 AM
Very nice.You have captured my feelings and put them into words. thanx for your comments on my poems.
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Date: 5/14/2009 10:06:00 PM
Lovely write.Thanks for commenting on my poem.
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Date: 4/24/2009 10:10:00 AM
I so understand and relate to this beautiful, and insightful, poem, Lena. I have been there, I am these...I knew/know. Love, Sara:)
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Date: 4/23/2009 11:38:00 PM
Lolita thank you for your welcome blog comments today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/23/2009 8:52:00 PM
Yes, the "eternal flame" of passion leaves "victims in pain," but we pursue it longingly nonethelesss. Must be human nature to be a "captive...bound by desire." Awesome writing, Lolita!
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Date: 4/23/2009 8:29:00 AM
Someone wrote somewhere that great artists are transformers of pain ... I believe oysters are artists too, they make pearls from pain ... you transcend it all, you are the pearl of the pain reflecting the beauty of light that all your poems are ... stay transcendant and strong, sister ... my prayers are inexhaustible for healing everywhere.
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Date: 4/23/2009 8:24:00 AM
This person sounds like a real fighter.. aperson who been through a lot and endured..a person who is unknown by many eventhough their soul flame with passion that your the voice in the poem can recognize..I enjoyed the read.
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