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A Passionate Encounter

Or An Overnight Romance. We met by chance in a shopping mall, Could see you were “special,” the best of all. I made my advances, which rang your bell, That you liked me too, was easy to tell. I said but little, as we walked round and about, So took you home, for I had nary a doubt, That you were ideal for an intimate tete a tete, Being totally convinced our meeting was fate. I sat on the couch, with you snuggled up tight, That my arms now held you, seemed so right. When it grew late, I suggested we share a bed: With no objection from you, we went ahead. I laid you down gently, holding you tightly, And this passionate moment, seemed rightly, One we should follow, for we thought it okay! So every night, I cuddle up to my new duvet! Rhymer. November 30th, 2016

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Date: 11/30/2016 6:47:00 PM
Loved the hook! Love the word duvet! enjoyed ~ john
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Denis Barter
Date: 12/1/2016 6:26:00 AM
Thanks John. I'll bet quite a few let their minds wander down a different path and ending - Lol! That was my intention! Have a great day. Ciao Denis.
Date: 11/30/2016 5:49:00 PM
That was funny, loved the gotcha ending. Perfectly done my friend
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Denis Barter
Date: 12/1/2016 6:25:00 AM
Thanks Chris, glad you enjoyed it. Wonder how many were led down the garden path? Lol! Ciao Denis.

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