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A Passerby's Dedication

Just and true; unafraid to make a stand Understanding and true—you are a true man So lucky am I to be in your presence Though I know you not—I am filled with reverence Interesting and unique you are to me Never change; and be whatever your heart wants to be! Can I ever have the honor of being your friend? Observing you with people—your kindness never ends Never have I seen someone quite like you Never will I find a person so devoted and true Often I wonder if you could ever... Remember me...probably never.

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M.I.A .

Date: 3/18/2012 1:32:00 AM

yes, it's beautiful! hope everything went well ;)

Željko Sitar

Date: 3/15/2012 2:05:00 PM

I wish I am that g.. So beautiful poem!!! ;))

M. Hussain Effendi

Date: 3/15/2012 1:53:00 AM

If someone said such a thing to me, I would say YES!!! with my tongue rolled out! He would probably do the same.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/15/2012 1:06:00 PM

Aww, thank you. But he's so shy. (: But he's really nice and I like him. Always, Laura

Daver Austin

Date: 3/14/2012 2:12:00 PM

Can't help ya, Laura - not enough information. Good write, though. Love, daver

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/14/2012 4:17:00 PM

Ha ha...okay. But thanks for reading anyhow. I love your poetry by the way. :D Always, Laura

Sarah Mullan

Date: 3/14/2012 10:54:00 AM

That's sweet :) this guy would be lucky to get such insight to your thoughts. I hope everything goes well. Always, Sarah.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/14/2012 4:18:00 PM

Thank you, Sarah. Thanks for your input.

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/14/2012 10:08:00 AM

Laura, this is beautiful, give it to him as is. your words would inspire all, he's a lucky guy. harry

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/14/2012 4:16:00 PM

Aw, thanks. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/14/2012 7:22:00 AM

Good morning ;-) laura .give it to him you will make his day , thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Have yourself a good one*always~pd"

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/14/2012 4:16:00 PM

Okay...I will, but I am nervous. (: ...very nervous. xD

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2012 7:09:00 AM

A lovely gift, Laura !!! - oxox love Anne-Lise