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A Parents Loss

Baby Precious, cute. Crying, laughing, smiling. Crawl, tumble, walk, trip. Growing, exploring, leaving. Sad, dark gone.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/25/2011 10:52:00 PM

Ahhh, the baby became sad. Or maybe it was the parents sad! In any event, a passage of life. and you showed it wonderfully!

Shannon Deane

Date: 11/22/2011 9:12:00 AM

The simplest of words can sometimes paint the biggest of pictures...lovely write...luv shannon

Lisa Cooper

Date: 11/21/2011 2:52:00 PM

that pretty much sums it up my friend, you only have your child for a while then they grow up and leave.... if you're lucky they may call again.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/21/2011 6:50:00 AM

I love what you did with the form... sad but I guess its life... luv Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/20/2011 8:15:00 PM

very well expressed cory...so full of emotion..good luck in the contest.. my right hand is in a cast from finger surgery last week so have not been on PS ..need to rest and not type but am sneaking tonight..so hubby does not catch me ..haha..hope u are fine buddy...luv..