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A Note From My Elderly Shoe

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"One day while resting in the store, I saw you striding through the door. You seemed a kindly youngster who Would know just how to treat a shoe. Though nervous, newly-made, and shy, I tried my best to catch your eye. And soon my heart was filled with glee. You picked me up and purchased me! "You took me home and shined me up And kept me from your gnawing pup. Beneath your bed you made me wait Beside the one you called my mate. I sat forgotten there for weeks With dusty toys and dirty sneaks. Until, at last, one day at dawn You picked me up and put me on. "For months I took you where you chose. I saved your sole and heel and toes. We dodged the mud and sidewalk cracks And walked on walls and railroad tracks. You put your weight and trust on me And laced me tightly as can be. Through pain and sweaty feet and rain I held my tongue, did not complain. But now I'm old; there is no doubt. I'm tattered, torn, and all worn out. I hear you've bought a brand new pair. With all I've done, it isn't fair. Remember how we romped and ran? I need a good retirement plan. I've earned a better ending than The bottom of your garbage can." * * * * * (Did you notice the two shoe puns? "I saved your sole(soul" and "held my tongue")

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Date: 4/21/2023 11:19:00 AM
This is a creative write. Love It. I wish you would write more. Have a fun day writing away..................
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Date: 3/27/2023 9:26:00 AM
Just delightful - with good scans and rhymes and narrative.
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Date: 9/18/2019 8:56:00 AM
Richard ,a witty and funny poem, made me smile Anne
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Date: 8/23/2019 2:12:00 PM
This poem was obviously a walk in the park for you! Brilliantly written. Thoroughly enjoyed the read...Ron
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Richard Thomas
Date: 8/24/2019 5:29:00 PM
Thank you very much for reading this and very kind compliment
Date: 8/22/2019 9:17:00 AM
Richard, I like this poem. Was it the right shoe you left? -Richard
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Richard Thomas
Date: 8/22/2019 9:28:00 AM
Thank you. Your right/left line is clever. Wish I had thought of it when writing the poem.
Date: 8/18/2019 1:24:00 PM
Great one Richard! :)
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Richard Thomas
Date: 8/18/2019 4:49:00 PM
Thank you for taking time to comment.

Book: Shattered Sighs