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A Note At the End

Dear stranger even though you let me go, My heart and soul will still be with you, I'm sorry it had to end this way, But my life could not go no other way, Sometime's i think if i could have just seen your face, Everything would have been ok, But sometimes it just don't work out that way, Now i must go this pain is to much, I guess this is the end of our, Fatal love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/31/2008 11:01:00 PM
deep as it should be.really enjoyed it will read more
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Date: 7/10/2008 6:05:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Joanie. I hope you will continue to write and share your excellent poetry with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/13/2008 6:17:00 PM
almost everyone of my friends have tried to commit suicide and some have suceeded and it's all because they claim no one loves them... I thank you for this peom because it shows how much the simplist way of action can change someone's life in either a good way or bad, the simple action that plays a big role in everyone's life...the action of love
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