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A Noble Fir For Christmas Morn

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At first sight of first snow colour Scrapbook memories stir with folk within Where spirits of love, caring, and sharing were Whispers of our life we shared, brings wet tears that blur Of the old farmhouse toasty and warm within-doors Stipend oak wood was fed into its heart to burn Fiery amber, yellow, and reds comforting flames would flicker Crackling, sputtering sound of burning cinders Wisps of oak mixed with ma’s cooking would journey Shimmying up its way through the chimney Outside world had been cloaked in a white glittery sheen A heartwarming Snowman was always seen Decked out in his red scarf and top hat beaming By the front porch greeting passersby Red Birds perched and rustle the winter evergreens Conifer and denuded trees would unfurl a story book scene We would peek out the window when pa honked the horn On his 1940s green worn out pickup to warn He was back with a fresh cut noble fir for Christmas morn 11/28/2016

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Date: 11/29/2016 11:52:00 AM
What a beautiful picture you paint with words, Eve! You change a cold and snowy atmosphere into one that's heartwarming. The accompanying picture is equally delightful. Regards & Hugs // paul
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/1/2016 6:22:00 PM
Thank you, Paul, the warm feeling when I saw the photo just couldn't resist writing a poem Hugs Eve
Date: 11/29/2016 9:25:00 AM
Wonderful. Makes me long for times gone by. Oh to live in the country again and smell the fresh pines and fir trees. Love the imagery here and the warm feel to this. The pic is great too. A seven from me. God Bless, JB
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/29/2016 11:12:00 AM
Thank you, Judy, the feeling is mutual. I use to live in Oregon in a small town surrounded by mountains and trees and the drive to the closest big town was to take the winding roads surrounded by pine... Hugs Eve
Date: 11/28/2016 9:22:00 PM
I saw this photo on the net, now I can not do a poem on it, you outdid whatever I could say, loved this!! Hugs!
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/28/2016 9:26:00 PM
No i didn't you do much better work Hugs
Date: 11/28/2016 7:35:00 PM
Beautiful words with great imagery, Eve. Loved it!
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/28/2016 9:26:00 PM
Thank you, Rick Hugs Eve
Date: 11/28/2016 4:47:00 PM
what wonderful memories Eve you created such great images in my mind:-) hugs jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/28/2016 5:07:00 PM
Thank you, :) hugs

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