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A Nightingale Sings of Dawn's Glory

Cobwebs of thoughts dangle in forlorn corner Spun by emotions that surrendered long ago Still hanging out, anguished, in grip of throes Engrossed in silence while gazing night skies Admiring how they once painted astral designs Brush stroking delight by sheer hint of eyes Until the silken threads of lives ripped apart, Each filament eagerly tearing webs of hearts. Regrets of passion buzzed roiling wistful lives When placid frontiers encountered stormy tides Sailing smooth surfs that callously turned wild On oceans unfamiliar to the benevolent minds Beckoned by allure of prairies shamrock green Thinking out there grew a garden of paradise~~ Abundance of blossoms their lives couldn’t have, Squandering foolishly bond of love they had. Yet, the darkened nights they traversed all alone Heard repertoire of enchanting mirthful tone Wooing love, having crossed thousands of miles, Reminding them~ you don’t just abandon life, Trilling tunes of affection in imploring oratory Teaching humans secrets of romantic allegory When the dawning on horizon gleams lapis lazuli And a doting nightingale sings of dawn’s glory. Promise of hopeful day glimmered their insights Spurring their spirits to revisit places of delight, Those they painted once by sheer hint of eyes, Reassembling the filaments torn apart by time Proceeding soon mindfully to rebuild their nest Excited once again to hear chirps of hatchlings When the dawning on horizon gleams lapis lazuli And a doting nightingale sings of dawn’s glory. June 7, 2021 Placed 1st: This or that, vol 3 poetry contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh Title chosen: A nightingale sings of dawn’s glory

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Date: 11/11/2021 4:53:00 AM
Such enticing imagery and thought! Congratulations! I see why you placed first, Vijay!
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Date: 10/25/2021 8:45:00 PM
Vijay, this is so very beautiful, I know I commented earlier, but just reread it. This is a beautiful gem.
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Date: 6/24/2021 8:56:00 AM
A lovely poem and a very nice win! Your poetry awakens my imagination!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/24/2021 11:50:00 AM
Thank you Ann--much appreciate.
Date: 6/19/2021 12:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and what a beautiful poem.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/19/2021 5:15:00 AM
Much appreciate Terry--many thanks.
Date: 6/18/2021 10:46:00 PM
A brilliantly crafted verse, and congrats for a fine win
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/19/2021 5:14:00 AM
Thank you Aniruddha--much appreciate.
Date: 6/18/2021 7:04:00 PM
Oh my goodness, what an amazing thing to read of a fresh masterpiece straight from the poet's hand. This is already a fav, it is absolutely astounding! Oh, I just saw it is a first place win as well!! It is a very well deserved win. I am awestruck with its beauty. Congratulations!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/19/2021 5:14:00 AM
So very kind of you BJ. Much appreciate your cheerful feedback. Many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 6/18/2021 11:21:00 AM
A stunning masterpiece jam-packed with vivid imagery, Vijay! An instant fav for me. Heartiest congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/18/2021 1:54:00 PM
So special to hear that from you. Much appreciate your kind feedback, Edward. Many thanks for holding contests--not an easy task. A special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 6/18/2021 9:56:00 AM
The verse is truly wonderful Vijay, I’m in awe of every line you’ve written so beautifully. Congratulations on your well deserved win… Belle
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/18/2021 1:53:00 PM
Glad you stopped by with your kind feedback, Belle--many thanks.
Date: 6/18/2021 9:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Love your line, "And a doting nightingale sings of dawn’s glory." Enjoy your win with blessings.................
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/18/2021 1:52:00 PM
Much appreciate your visit and comments Paula--many thanks.
Date: 6/18/2021 8:52:00 AM
Back with my congratulations. His given titles sure inspired many wonderful poems from people.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/18/2021 1:52:00 PM
Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.
Date: 6/18/2021 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your great top win Vijay, you deserve it with this wonderfully written poem. Enjoy your honor, and have a blessed day.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/18/2021 1:51:00 PM
Much appreciate Lasaad--many thanks.
Date: 6/18/2021 7:21:00 AM
So Nice. Congratulations!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/18/2021 1:51:00 PM
Much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 6/16/2021 4:04:00 AM
Our inspiration on soup, that is what you are dear friend Vijay, each poem blessed by your kind heart and soul. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/18/2021 1:50:00 PM
Much appreciate my friend--many thanks.
Date: 6/14/2021 6:28:00 AM
Wonderful writing. I love this one. Such a breath of joy and inspiration. God bless you with a win, dear friend. Love, Gina
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/18/2021 1:50:00 PM
Thank you Gina--much appreciate.
Date: 6/13/2021 5:49:00 PM
Whenever I feel down ife I can take a walk or a drive into the country to commune with nature it always makes me feel better. The trill of the Robin is the sweetest song to me. Great job here. God Bless, JB
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/19/2021 6:15:00 AM
So true. Thank you Judy.
Date: 6/13/2021 12:21:00 PM
I see you got a win. Did this one just now get judged?? Gosh I need to go see. WAY TO GO, Vijay. sensational
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/19/2021 6:14:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 6/13/2021 7:40:00 AM
Harry used the perfect word. This pies is indeed “wonderous”.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/19/2021 6:14:00 AM
Much appreciate Richard--many thanks.
Date: 6/13/2021 1:47:00 AM
Truly wonderous poetry, Vijay love the journey from beginning to end.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/19/2021 6:13:00 AM
Thank you Harry--much appreciate.
Date: 6/12/2021 4:15:00 AM
Ahh!! What a delightful one you have penned in this. Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Sara
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/12/2021 6:33:00 AM
Much appreciate Sara--many thanks.
Date: 6/10/2021 1:07:00 AM
Your poetry does spark the interest of not just a passionate reader of poesy but also the one who can relate to all the wonderful Nature imagery! The power of your poetic craft and the mastery of a suitable diction enable your reader not only to decipher the words but also to feel the whole picture and mood.. and savour the flow of their rhythm and rhyming.. Thank you so much, dear Vijay for sharing your gem that displays a deeper sensitivity and understanding to life and Nature.. great poetry deserving to be widely read and highly valued and honoured.. My deepest regards and blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/10/2021 10:19:00 AM
Always a joy to read your comments, Besma. Much appreciate your kind feedback, as always. Many thanks. Regards.
Date: 6/9/2021 10:19:00 PM
A classic poem in your unique imagist style, Vijay:)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/10/2021 10:18:00 AM
Thank you Jo. Much appreciate.
Date: 6/9/2021 7:16:00 PM
Imagery galore. This is your trademark, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/10/2021 10:18:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. Much appreciate.
Date: 6/9/2021 1:13:00 PM
How glorious it is, the ability to start anew! Your poem is packed with powerful imagery and sure to place well in the contest, Good Luck Vijay !!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/10/2021 10:17:00 AM
Glad you stopped by Mike with your kind feedback. Many thanks.
Date: 6/9/2021 11:59:00 AM
You have truly mastered imagery and rhyme...Love how you flow...like a running river.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/10/2021 10:17:00 AM
Much appreciate Arturo--many thanks.
Date: 6/8/2021 8:39:00 PM
Vijay, That nightingale has visited many no doubt. Though your eloquence speaks volumes, even if there were a few regrets. And that shamrock, could it be a warning to some(?) -Richard
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/9/2021 4:23:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed reading the poem. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Richard. Many thanks.
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