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A Night To Remember

A dance to foretell of love's lasting kiss. I know him not well and hope more than this. A touch of his hand, my vantage, a dream, the ballroom is grand in splendorous gleam! The music plays loud - a Viennese waltz. Notes blend with the crowd in boisterous vaults, and Sirius shows more bright than before. The night's starry glow warms me to my core. Toasts, cheers and laughter - merriment galore! Champagne sips after each spin on the floor. My dance card is filled, but all my eyes see - strong man with tall build, how handsome is he! With touch of his cheek and twinkling brown eyes, more words do I seek than polite replies. Then, when dance is done and night stops to rest, my head will have won a place on his chest. One familiar glance, vows exchanged in June, all from a first dance that ended too soon. for Isaiah Zerbst's Ballroom Delight Contest, 11/16/14

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Date: 12/26/2014 9:33:00 PM
RHONDA, A beautiful and wonderful Ballroom Delight. Congrats on your win :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/22/2014 2:43:00 PM
Aaah, like it - simplicity but says a lot within I think
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Date: 12/16/2014 9:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Rhonda! Beautiful and so romantic! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/16/2014 4:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Rhonda, beautiful poem. Bless you
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Date: 12/16/2014 2:20:00 PM
congratulations Rhonda on your wonderful win , well done
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Date: 12/16/2014 2:17:00 PM
There's always this one guy your eyes follow all night and you pray they ask you. Dreams are so special and you captured this beautifully in this enchanting poem. Congratulations on your win Rhonda.
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Date: 12/16/2014 1:07:00 PM
I am impressed Rhonda and so happy that the judge saw the beauty here,congtrats on this deserved win...huggs
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Date: 12/16/2014 11:57:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Rhonda:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/17/2014 4:15:00 PM
You are a true romantic, he must have been a fool not to extend your dance beyond the dance floor.
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Date: 11/17/2014 8:00:00 AM
Oh my goodness, I love this work, it's sensual, and passionate and whatever prompted it's creation must have been a powerful moment indeed, my favorite I've read so far. :)
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Date: 11/16/2014 5:19:00 PM
beautiful imagery and flow to the poem - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan x
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