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A Night Sky

Universe goes calm With the sunset, That's twilight of Reddish yellow sky, All longings Reaching to rest. Sky disappears Into darkness, Eyes go blind Looking into zero, That's the hue of A Night sky. Awaits moon and stars To prove its Very being, Lustrous bodies Add glitter to The Night sky. A perfect song That twinkles, Melodious to heart With eyes winkles, Packed beautitude, A Night sky ! Written by Dr. Upma A. Sharma on 28/3/14 For the contest ' A night sky' By Nette onclaud

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Date: 4/23/2014 6:38:00 PM
I love how you described the stars as being like glitter in a night sky. Very beautiful imagery in this poem. A great write, Dr. Upma! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/22/2014 2:34:00 PM
Congratulations on this well-deserved win, Dr! Very nice imagery. I envision the sky disappearing above my head whilst moons & stars glisten nighly.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/23/2014 5:31:00 AM
Thanks a lot for ur valuable comments Ivo..../upma/
Date: 4/22/2014 2:20:00 PM
Lovely night sky Dr. Upma. worthy of this win. congrats. // paul
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/23/2014 5:31:00 AM
feeling happy that u liked .... thanks Paul /upma/
Date: 4/21/2014 9:33:00 PM
Dr Umpa, Congratulations, --Enjoyed your awesome win. Thank you so much for the support... Always & forever *Linda
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/23/2014 5:32:00 AM
Thanks Linda,,,for the like n for ur wishes,,,/upma/
Date: 3/28/2014 9:15:00 PM
I love the part: To prove its very being. How cool!! Great entry for that contest.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/23/2014 5:33:00 AM
Thanks Andrea for ur lovely comments,,/upma/
Date: 3/28/2014 12:36:00 PM
a perfect canvass of a night sky--- this is great poem, Upma!! good luck in the contest--- ^__^
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/23/2014 5:34:00 AM
happy that u liked n a win wid ur kind wishes Aiyah,,,/upma/

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