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A Newfangled Sonnet

Nature is whispering for me to come, to meander in a forest- green hued; and rest beside a gentle rippling stream, then, lay among wild flowers in a field. as butterflies float and my soul is healed, and grief is washed away in a sunbeam; soon, vine tangled winding trails still my mood, and to the peaceful bird songs- I succumb. Ducks and ducklings float in mossy pond scum, as I watch them eat for an interlude; oh, my view is a painting color-scheme, and in nature all my pain is unsealed. For it is in God's beauty I let go, beneath a beautiful weeping willow; I throw away all my sorrow and woe, and because of nature- I can now grow. ________________ June 23, 2021 Poetry/Sonnet/A Newfangled Sonnet Copyright Protected, ID 06-1366-334-23 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France A Newfangled Sonnet- abcddcbaabcd eeee- 10 syllable lines Written for the Premier contest, Contemporary Sonnet sponsor, Charlotte Puddifoot, Judged 08/25/2021 Sixth Place

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Date: 8/25/2021 4:45:00 PM
Dear Constance, congratulations for your excellent win in Charlotte's contest with your beautiful poem. Indeed, Nature is compassionate, palliative and empowering and your splendid pen expresses this wondrously. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Constance La France
Date: 8/25/2021 4:52:00 PM
Susan, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment on my poem, appreciate ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/25/2021 5:30:00 AM
this was like an oasis of calm in the midst of some of the more edgy topics! a more traditional subject but with a contemporary rendering, and i love your use of the word 'unsealed' in that line..this was one of the most difficult contests i've ever judged as i had a lot of superb entries..well done, and congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/25/2021 10:19:00 AM
Charlotte, thank you for the contest, and for my placement and for the compliment and congrats, appreciate ~ love and serenity ~Constance
Date: 8/25/2021 5:16:00 AM
As butterflies float and my soul is healed - Beautiful. Congratulations on your win!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/25/2021 10:20:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations ~ peace and tranquility ~ Constance
Date: 6/23/2021 7:28:00 PM
I love it, Constance. I love to see creative departures from the standard formats. My creative spirit says we cannot break the rules enough. Good writing!
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Date: 6/24/2021 11:21:00 AM
Milt, thank you for the compliment, yes I broke a lot of Sonnet rules, and like you say to be creative we must ~peace and tranquility _Constance

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