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A New World

Just close my eyes And I’ll just pretend He was long gone Left us no end. I think it’s strange When he’s not around All things were so well When we’re at the ground. If he only knew Mom is shattered The pain that he gave Left father battered. Our endless grief He left the real world We know he’ll be kind To God’s new world.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/28/2015 6:56:00 AM
Someone, something caused the intense sadness in your poem Lei... it's a poignant write. Simple but tugs at the heartstrings. HUgs! Ate Kim...PS 2nd stanza, 3rd line - things...:) :)
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