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A New Sun Rises

A new sun will rise and fall on my days Until a moment I finally sleep While footprints I've made fade slowly away Time will move forward and it will not weep I am a sweet breath that never lingers To be born then forever disappear To measure time with gray wrinkled fingers They come over years and slowly appear The quiet filled hole I shall never own To lay beneath the earth where grass roots feed A world empty of life, cold and alone A cycle not of wanting but of need Should I need answers for reasons time found The days I have lived I have found profound

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/2/2016 3:23:00 PM
Yes !! The days that's you've traveled are indeed profound !! Poetry speaks for all of those days !! Congratulations, Frederic !!
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Date: 8/2/2016 2:22:00 PM
Profound indeed...congrats Frederic on the placement
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Date: 8/2/2016 2:02:00 PM
I like this ... reflection. Read it several times. Great ending lines. Congrats on your placement. :-)
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Date: 8/2/2016 10:44:00 AM
Frederic, Congratulations on your win. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog 'Mistaken Identity.' Forever **SKAT**
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