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A New Beginning

We walk the trails, kicking leaves, wondering if the other believes that this is a new start for each. That maybe it is within our reach. Holding hands, walking slow, letting feelings tentatively grow. We are not young, we are not new. If this is love, its overdue. A friendship we started some time ago is becoming something deeper though. We shall not rush it, we'll patiently wait and leave it in the hands of fate. ~~~ ~~~ ~~~ for Michael Falotico's contest "Falling in Love in the Fall" ~~~ ~~~ ~~~ Francine Roberts 24/09/2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/28/2011 9:56:00 AM
Thsi is sucha a wonderful story. Great peotry flow in every line.
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Date: 9/27/2011 11:27:00 PM
Great poetry does flow, in every line, the meaning though, could be sublime, the wanting so, perhaps in time, the loving heart, the path to climb...
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Date: 9/27/2011 10:11:00 AM
I am stopping by your wonderful poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on my writing Francine. Hope you have an inspiration filled week. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/25/2011 5:04:00 AM
its good, i can see you have a wide vocbulary, i like it, it does seem that it should be longer but it gets to the point and can make some people think, if they've never experienced love
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Date: 9/24/2011 10:15:00 PM
gosh, is this a true story? It's wonderful, Francine. When I post mine, just know,it's all made up! I always enjoy seeing your poetry when I peruse the new poems by poet list. (just wish I had time to do that more often). Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/24/2011 8:58:00 PM
Good stuff, Francine. Loved the imagery in the first stanza. Wayne
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Date: 9/24/2011 6:41:00 PM
Wow! I really enjoyed reading you, Roberts. Nice fow, plus a beauty of language.
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