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A New Beginning

Snow
Falling
Like feathers
So soft and white
Lying on the ground
Covering old footprints
Muddied paths best forgotten
Replaced by the  beauty of now
A clean slate for you to walk upon
A new world that awaits your tomorrow     


Written:  Jan 22, 2011

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Funom Makama Date: 6/11/2012 4:49:00 AM This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/29/2011 5:37:00 AM Congratulations Lainie on your win in the "Any Form -Theme" contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/26/2011 7:38:00 AM Congrats Lainie on your first place win in Brian's contest with another lovely poem from your creative soul my friend..luv.. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/28/2011 6:09:00 AM Beauty is in the eye of the beholder and you have beheld beauty with yours to share with us...Enjoyed..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 1/23/2011 8:13:00 AM Egad! A poem dealing with snow that isn't negative. Very beautiful, Lainie. I was just thinking this morning of writing a poem called, "White." I mean, like, everything white. I would also use the Etheree. What could be more deadly, frozen. Maybe I will change my mind. Love,Dave Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/23/2011 7:53:00 AM Good morning, Elaine,, deep with a touch of softness, let the new journey begin.. enjoyed,..p.d. Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 1/22/2011 8:37:00 PM A true inspirational beauty, 'Laine...much uplifting and hope. :) Always, Annalise Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/22/2011 6:00:00 PM Forever lovely Elaine are your dramatic words so full of imagery .. snow is not my fav thing but your poetry is so much ..luv.. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 1/22/2011 2:24:00 PM Very hopeful write on the new beginning, Elaine Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/22/2011 1:16:00 PM Awesome, snowy white beautiful. A 7! Login to Reply