Home » Poems » Jack Ellison » A New Alignment

A New Alignment

Where can I go to buy some real excitement Is there a shop where I can get a new alignment Would pay big money In fact dollars by the tunny To experience the joy of a little refinement © Jack Ellison 2015

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Tim Smith

Date: 10/16/2015 4:11:00 PM

I know a place but you might not come back....will cure all you ills while you lie on your back....your smiles will shine....like you drank to much wine....are you ready to go my dearest friend Jack

Carol Eastman

Date: 10/16/2015 1:54:00 PM

When the stars align... All will be fine... But they'll only align inside your mind... But silly thing... You were never unrefined... Just didn't recognize it, you were kinda blind... LOL... Just kidding! But it DID rhyme!... Hey... If Grandpa Troll can be considered refined... Then I wouldn't worry if I were you... LOL

Dan Cwiak

Date: 10/16/2015 1:51:00 PM

Nicely put, Jack. When you find the place, let me know because they will have another customer.

Judy Konos

Date: 10/16/2015 11:08:00 AM

Yellow Pages look under Enhancements...then stop at drug store and get batteries by the dozen on sale

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/16/2015 11:26:00 AM

LOL Never thought of that!!!! Love The Jakester!!! xoxox

Michael Tor

Date: 10/16/2015 10:34:00 AM

Excitement is found here, So pull up a chair and a cold beer. Cause were screaming for the Blue Jays with loud cheer! Screw the Mets, it's Jacks Blue Jays year!!!!!!! How you like them Apples Sir Jack???????

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/16/2015 11:05:00 AM

Love them apples... it's the Jays year... FINALLY! I feel it in my bones! A murderous line-up for sure!!!