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Thank you to all who care and showed your love. You people are the only friends I have and I appreciate all the kindness that has been and is shown to me on a daily basis. DT

While chasing after my beguiling muse I fell into the bottomless abyss Free falling into darkness does confuse Despair replaces fragile happiness This chill of loneliness I've felt before No longer does the darkness summon fear Cause hope is like a beacon on the shore And love of friends provides a net of tears But getting out is not an easy task It all depends on just how far I fall And when I reach the top I'll don my mask To hide the shame and stigma of it all Then once again I'll strive to reach my goal To find a cover for this damn manhole an original poem by Daniel Turner

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Elissa Quigley

Date: 9/16/2016 10:45:00 AM

This write touched deep thank you for sharing.

Keith Logan

Date: 9/9/2016 7:30:00 AM

Those pesky muses always like to cause a flap. Truth is I think they have a wicked sense of humor.

Daniel Turner
Date: 9/9/2016 2:33:00 PM

You know Keith, I'm beginning to think you're right! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate your support:)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/6/2016 4:41:00 AM

Very deep and heartfelt sonnet, Daniel:) Hope you are feeling well now:)

Daniel Turner
Date: 9/6/2016 7:28:00 PM

Thank you, Jo. Yes, I am feeling better. I appreciate your thoughtfulness. You are so kind. It's always my pleasure when you drop by.

Carole Duet

Date: 9/3/2016 11:43:00 PM

Daniel...I'm glad I chose to read this one although it makes my heart hurt for you. I think it's a wonderful poem and the more I read your writing the more I realize what a truly wonderful poet you are. But remember our pain makes us more receptive to others' pain too, more understanding. Thank you for coming to chat tonight and I hope you will read the message I left you in your soupmail.

Daniel Turner
Date: 9/4/2016 8:26:00 AM

Thank you, Carole. Somehow, I don't feel like a wonderful poet:) Just an old man who likes to dabble with rhymes. I appreciate your kindness and your support. Buddy and I will go to the mailbox:)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/31/2016 6:11:00 PM

WOW! This is a great sonnet, Daniel--full of feeling and skillfully-written. Janice

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/31/2016 6:16:00 PM

Thank you, Janice. Your enthusiasm is infectious, I am grateful that I have made friends like you. It certainly helps when I'm feeling low. I always enjoy your company and thank you for your kindness.

Dave Timperley

Date: 8/31/2016 8:53:00 AM

I love this work Daniel, I felt I was falling for a Mr Shakespear. until you brought me back to earth with that last line. Great!. God Bless D.

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/31/2016 10:04:00 AM

Thank you Dave, Humor is always a good face to put on for a disguise. I appreciate your time and support.

Mike Hauser

Date: 8/30/2016 10:48:00 PM

I love the way you rhyme my friend!

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/31/2016 7:36:00 AM

Thanks Mike. I think I do it so much, I'm starting to talk like this.Lol Maybe a new theme for one of your funny poems! Take care my friend and thanks for stopping by:)

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/30/2016 8:18:00 PM

A beautifully-written Sonnet...very emotional and heartfelt, Daniel. We all have those times for sure. Life is a constant tide of ebb and flow. Hugs, Sandra ;)

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/30/2016 9:00:00 PM

I'm thankful I have a good DR! Thank you for your support. Your friendship is priceless!

Jean Murray

Date: 8/30/2016 4:53:00 PM

Never want to go back there. Easy to understand "the chill of lonliness " you speak of Daniel.

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/30/2016 5:59:00 PM

Yes, Jean. I am certain others have felt the chill. I take meds to warm me up! Thank you for your friendship and for your support. I don't know where I would be without it.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/30/2016 3:32:00 PM

Daniel, I hope that black veil is lifted soon and you are bathed in comforting light that inspires your muse. I can relate. Cheers, Connie ; )

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/30/2016 4:23:00 PM

Thank you Mrs Connie. I think I'll let my muse come to me, instead of chasing her! She always runs to the past! Thank you for your treasured friendship and support:)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/30/2016 3:12:00 PM

Awe.. Daniel thank you for calling me a friend... always here not unless I get sick...Hope never. Like you no friends since I moved from beautiful Oregon to Hot Texas here people seem to be afraid of the human race . Hugs Eve

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/30/2016 4:21:00 PM

I used to live in West Texas, that is where I met my second wife. It would have been very difficult for me to move from Oregon to Texas. I once dated a girl who lived in Portland and have been there many many times. Yes, you are a dear friend Mrs Eve. Thank you for your support and prayers.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/30/2016 2:35:00 PM

All we have is now...and now I am your friend...and in the future now as well...and if you need to talk I am here for you Daniel ...great write and thank you for being a friend too...god bless...^WW^

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/30/2016 4:14:00 PM

Thank you, WW(John) I appreciate the offering of a hand. I have serious trust issues! Thanks for your kindness and your friendship:)

John Hamilton

Date: 8/30/2016 2:04:00 PM

See you did it, you battled that muse and won, great sonnet Daniel keep fighting the battle against depression can be won, but we need help, you know what I mean. Keep up the writing, we all wish the best for you!

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/30/2016 4:12:00 PM

John, it is a never ending battle. It's kinds like driving in spring after the winter storms. There is a new pothole everyday in a different place. Thanks for your friendship and support:)

Lin Lane

Date: 8/30/2016 12:50:00 PM

There's no shame in falling unless you don't get back up. Let your NETwork of friends cover that manhole for you. Reach up and grab a hand. This is really good, Danny, and in sonnet form.. yeah, I noticed ;-)

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2016 6:06:00 PM

You're so welcome, Danny. I value your friendship.

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/30/2016 4:28:00 PM

Lin, I've never before had a hand to reach up to! I've done everything on my own since I was 17. I have great difficulty now writing rhymes. Sonnets have become more natural. Thank you for you wonderful friendship and never ending kindness. The beauty of your heart shines brightly!

Tim Smith

Date: 8/30/2016 12:17:00 PM

Love the humor at the end DT. We all have battles to fight and I am glad to have friends that will stand beside me or give a helping when I fall...cheers

Daniel Turner
Date: 8/30/2016 4:07:00 PM

Thanks Tim. I value your friendship:)