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A Need

Black storm clouds sweep across the sky No where does one see a ray of light Lost are all hopes all dreams Pain no time can ever erase Loneliness like a festering sore A crying out for life, a need for love A need to be held as never before To be wanted and cherished To be all to someone, not an adjunct To have four walls that are one’s own Familiar objects place and space Not a puppet controlled by strings Not an island one one’s own Tired of oneself scared to start again Madness within breaking through the flesh A need for passion to inter-connect Come cherish the rose in bloom Before it withers and dies Like a book unread and a song unsung Useless waste swept away by time (Poem written a long time ago).

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/4/2011 9:22:00 PM
to be alone n watch the phone, goes darkly does the night, santa claus is coming home, to load up christmas delights....
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Date: 12/3/2011 10:53:00 PM
Lizzie, Beautiful yet sad. I hope that you are not suffering through such loneliness. Very interesting piece.
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Date: 12/3/2011 8:02:00 AM
Wow! Lizzie... this poem, is awesome..I think some of my old old writes.. are way better than anything i have on the soup right now... A very dark poem.. even than our writes tell us much.. enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 12/3/2011 7:24:00 AM
Massive lines. Considering you wrote this a long time ago, it reminds me of a little saying: "You may not yet be where you wanna be, but be glad you're not where you used to be." I dig this piece a lot.
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Date: 12/3/2011 5:02:00 AM
This is the type of poetry I love. A journey into who we are and how we became oneself. Luv Michael
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Date: 12/3/2011 4:32:00 AM
hey Lizzie very moving, hope happier times have been swept in..David
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