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A Naked Dream

I always wanted to play chess But not in a state of undress My doctor was there He tried not to stare Then told me my body's a mess...

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/26/2010 12:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning poem Barbara in John Freeman's contest"Compromising Dreams". Love,Carol

Mitch White

Date: 7/23/2010 9:51:00 PM

OMG embarrassing for sure- Congrats on the win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/23/2010 9:22:00 AM

Congrats Barb on your number one win in John's contest for this unique and original write .. enjoy another biggie.. with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2010 9:48:00 PM

Hey, I am seeing lotsa good ones from this contest. CONgraulations, Barbara!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/22/2010 9:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your limerick win. I think we've all had his crazy dream. Or there's another one, Using the bathroom in a public place and finding no door on the stall. Love, Joyce

John Freeman

Date: 7/22/2010 9:07:00 PM

Congratulations Babara, Haaa! seem like the most unlikely people are always there. Smile, Agape, Moses

Timothy Brumley

Date: 7/22/2010 7:04:00 PM

Ouch! That's not good news! Who won the game? :) I just posted my first blog, you're welcomed to visit.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/22/2010 4:36:00 PM

Nightmare that went from bad to worse..Hope that it is for the contest and not real life..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/22/2010 3:55:00 PM

Today as I read this piece you have written I am thankful that you have shared it with us. I hope you will present us with more of your poetry in the near future. Don't let your ink dry out. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Barbara. Love, Carol