A Mystery

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The older I get, I continue to find that there are still many layers to me...still growing or evolving. However, I'm enjoying my discoveries! LOL

Like smoke, the years accrue and vanish Still, I am a mystery unto myself! ~*~ 3/'13

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Matthew Horstkotter

Date: 6/2/2013 6:19:00 AM

Very interesting poem.

Karen Anglesey

Date: 5/12/2013 10:22:00 AM

WOW. This is amazing. So much said in a few powerful words. Love it!

Jack Jordan

Date: 5/12/2013 9:19:00 AM

For me, years of therapy have not changed what you describe. I learn something new about myself all too frequently, yesterday for example. Brief and insightful. Good writing... Jack

Karen Anglesey

Date: 5/11/2013 10:23:00 PM

I can really relate to this one. Very thoughtful and so true !

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/11/2013 4:58:00 PM

Annalise, :-) Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda

Jack Horne

Date: 5/11/2013 3:09:00 PM

love this deep write, my friend. Sending you hugs x

Monterey Sirak

Date: 5/11/2013 6:08:00 AM

Wonderful! You condensed an epic poem of life into two sentences showing us there is always more to learn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2013 1:18:00 AM

It is a pleasure to see this one tonight, Annalise!