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A Musical Special

I Watched TV last night a musical special-- not one of the young singers had taken time to learn proper breathing, to smoothly exhale vowels crimp the consonants unlike even the basic cable guy executing wire relieved at least they are not physicians at my throat-- pools of blood wail the mystics bemoaning the letting intimately knowing our relationship to Spirit Divine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/19/2016 6:38:00 PM
Joe, Thanks for the visit to my page...I appreciate the time spent here..Yes, our pets become extended family..Sara..Great critique of the inexperienced voice..There some good ones though in all those that need much help at least over here in those talent contest..
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Joe Dimino
Date: 8/20/2016 1:56:00 PM
Thank you so much. I enjoyed your poem very much. Have beautiful day!

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