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A Musical Love

Clothes all wrinkled on the floor... A pathway of roses to my door... Like a sweet wine tasting, we sip... Tasting each others love on our lips... The radio is off but there are musical sounds... Our voices harmonize as our bodies lie down... As our toes curl in passion we melt into the sheets... The temperatures outside are cool but in the bedroom it is all about the heat... Erotica contest....by F.H. written by Michael J. Falotico 10/24/11

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Craig Schaber

Date: 11/13/2011 7:44:00 AM

very good poem loved it

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/5/2011 10:49:00 PM

michael;-) CONGRATULATIONS, ON YOUR WIN~ Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/3/2011 9:18:00 PM

I just KNEW he would like this. A big congratulations to you, Michael.

John Smith

Date: 11/3/2011 6:20:00 PM

Evocative erotica. Congratulations on your win.

Nancy Jones

Date: 11/2/2011 4:47:00 PM

and the beat goes on... nice on, Michael, grats. Namaste~N

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/2/2011 10:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Frank's "Erotica" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/2/2011 10:12:00 AM

Congrats Michael luv on a fantastic win with this visual delight for the contest luv.. always special are your wonderful words of luv and emotion and passion..now your J.G. needs a cold shower ..

Dinda Minardi

Date: 11/2/2011 9:30:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Michael :)

David Williams

Date: 11/2/2011 7:54:00 AM

Michael congrats on your win, cool and sexy poem..loved it my friend..David

M.I.A .

Date: 10/30/2011 4:42:00 PM

Wow indeed! 'Tasting each others love on our lips...' says it all. best wishes always.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2011 4:35:00 PM

wow, LOVE it!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/25/2011 8:43:00 AM

Such subtle passion expressed by a true lover. How I enjoy this. oooooh!

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 10/24/2011 10:28:00 AM

Erotic but tasteful write. You got the balance right! Some good, poetic lines here. Good luck in the contest. Robert.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/24/2011 10:18:00 AM

oh yes.. oh more than yes,,Michael luv.. this is a hot number and erotica plus poetry luv.. good luck in Frank's contest.. the heat will rise to the top for sure.. new fav for the "Sweetheart" .. xoxo..J.G. in heat now..haha..