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A Murder

Poetry,they will dissect you ignoring poet's bleeding heart, a judgement today for you too, poetry, they will dissect you! So many knives to cut you through a bleeding heart will fall apart. Poetry they will dissect you ignoring poet's bleeding heart! ===============000================ Contest-TRIOLET Form-TRIOLET : A French verse form. Its rhyme scheme is ABaAabAB and all lines are in iambic tetrameter; the first, fourth and seventh lines are identical, as are the second and final lines, thereby making the initial and final couplets identical as well. The features of the Triolet are: 8 lines. Two rhymes. 5 of the 8 lines are repeated or refrain lines. First line repeats at the 4th and 7th lines. Second line repeats at the 8th line. Rhyme scheme (where an upper-case letter indicates the appearance of an identical line, while a lower-case letter indicates a rhyme with each line designated by the same lower-case or upper-case letter) ==================000==================

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  1. Date: 10/14/2013 9:34:00 PM
    I got one word for you KASH..... .. WOW! ........................PD

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 1:26:00 PM
    I notice from the comments below that you won a contest with this one. I'm not surprised, Kash. I admire people who try different forms and then manage to carry it off well, as you did here. Well done, my friend. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 5:45:00 PM
    Hey, kash. Glad you liked my choco mama. Are you a choco papa??

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 8:37:00 PM
    Well written and very well expressed. I really like the unique creativity. Well done :)

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 7:48:00 AM
    woww.. this one has dissected me..

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 2:38:00 PM
    kashi bud, when do i see you again?.. awhhh!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 11:53:00 PM
    long time no see here at Soup, Kash, Miss your routine visits!!!

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 11:49:00 PM
    WOW, what a great theme you chose for yours. I think you really deserved to win this contest. I do not know how you placed because I only am seeing congrats to you below. You deserved a high place with this one.

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:52:00 PM
    Hi Kash, , congratulations!! awesome "Triolet" ... xox~ LINDA :-)

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 9:29:00 AM
    I must had miss this contest... congratulations... xox..Linda

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 2:48:00 AM
    wowowow, congrats dear kashi bud!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 9:08:00 PM
    Wow...a very poetic and edgy verse that follows a stunning title . Well done :)

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 2:58:00 PM
    powerful and clever kash.Hope you are doing fine kash.My baby girl just turned one two days ago : )..and did quite a few steps on her own today : )

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 4:06:00 PM
    Like the theme..Congrats on your great work.Sara

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 5:44:00 PM
    amazing win...SKAT

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 6:57:00 PM
    Well said. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 10:19:00 AM
    hello, kashi... come visit!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 8:37:00 AM
    wow! truly a great piece, how can i even compete with that, but compete i must and try, this is surely top 3! good luck

    Morgan Avatar Danesh Morgan
    Date: 8/21/2013 8:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dnt mind if i copy yr poem. . . trying to do it but need an example to follow the pattern and yours is perfect. . .
  1. Date: 8/21/2013 6:58:00 AM
    kashi, this is so powerful and well rendered!... bow!...:)

    onclaud Avatar nette onclaud
    Date: 8/21/2013 6:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 6:47:00 AM
    This is a wonderful Triolet my friend, and it is an honor to have have had the chance to read this exceptional poem here Kashi! I really enjoyed reading this fabulous piece this morning! What an outstanding poem, Great Work!!