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A Mothers Pain

Take it from me, You don't see what I see You don't hear what I hear, You don't feel what I feel, But most of all you don't fear what I fear. You see an addict, The scum of the earth, The low lives and degenerates, A society of no value or worth. I see my daughter, The child I held in my arms, The baby I cherished Vowed no one would harm. You see an addict, You turn and walk away, You cross the street, "Parenting these days" I see an addict, I plead and I pray "Dear God please, Don't take my baby away. You see your child, Out there on the swing, You see your child, They laugh and they sing. This was my daughter, Back in the day, Before heroin came, Andtook her away. You thinkit's a choice, You think they don't care, You don't see the fight, You don't see the despair. I see a lost soul, With an awful disease, I don't know how she got there, But she wants to be free. You say that is one thing, My child wouldn't do, But you don't know the future, You're not wearing those shoes. I pray God blesses you, And keeps your family safe, I wish for no one, To be in my place. To see what I see, To hear what I hear, To feel what feel, But most of all to fear what I fear. 12/18/2014

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Date: 1/5/2015 5:13:00 AM
- A warm welcome to the P - Soup and into the new year 2015 - I look forward to reading more of your poems this year - I hope you will enjoy reading and writing with us, Linda - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/4/2015 4:45:00 PM
Linda,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/4/2015 6:35:00 AM
Emotional poem that only a mother could convey the genuine heartfelt sadness so well. Welcome to Soup !! looking forward to seeing more. Hugs . Anne
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Linda Mcpeak
Date: 1/4/2015 4:10:00 PM
Thank You
Date: 1/4/2015 1:52:00 AM
hi Linda and welcome to Soup what a superb first poem. You will find the more you comment on others poems the more they will read and comment on yours again a warm welcome hugs
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Linda Mcpeak
Date: 1/4/2015 4:11:00 PM
I love poetry and I plan to read as many as possible, thank You.
Date: 1/4/2015 1:40:00 AM
Yes! A very gritty, heartfelt poem!! :) john.
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