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A Most Exquisite Feeling

Exquisite is the feeling of making love No other sensation could feel so overwhelming That moment of pure ecstasy How to describe it... it is next to impossible The best we can do is to say It's an explosive sensation that takes us to another planet When we leave our earthly body And travel to the heavens on high The world could be crashing down around us But we would be oblivious for that brief moment in time That moment of sublime ecstasy Must go lie down now! © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 2/7/2014 6:06:00 PM
Yes, Jack....it surely it! :)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/7/2014 7:05:00 PM
You got it, Eileen! Way way ahead of whatever comes second! LOL Love, Kenny XOXOX
Date: 2/7/2014 1:16:00 PM
Dragon LOVES eating chocolate! He LOVES it!!! But, It melts too quickly, driving him crazy! He can't get it to his mouth fast enough! But not for lack of trying! His best idea so far was to roll it up in a pancake... Therefore insulating it long enough to get in his mouth... But the pure taste is what he really wants, and dreams about! Poor guy! We even tried throwing it a his mouth while he holds his breath. Almost made it... need a faster thrower... Poor Dragon! Never a dull moment! LOL
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/7/2014 5:04:00 PM
WOW! Got all hot and bothered writing this one. PHEW!!! XOXOXOX
Date: 2/7/2014 6:31:00 AM
Wow, now that is a powerful write my friend! You surely have delighted me with the splendor of this amazing poem this morning! I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem! What a significant piece, Great Work!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/7/2014 6:33:00 AM
Thank you once again, my friend!

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