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A Mortal Man Unveil Nature's Rule

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Are we tedious, given the camera's dexterity? Requiring what our reasons tell us to escape. The topic's dualism generates disparity. Using these subjects to symbolize "reshape" I'll dig them up and bid farewell, verity. Desire and aversion avert the soul's clemency. Cynical evil hinders delight from spreading, You foster anchoring and hedonistic tendency. Happiness shrinks as expectation embedding. If you're an oddity, then bear the pendency. The realm of light is infinite and over pure. Ethical glow would rouse delight and bliss. Lack of egoism defines the core of the cure. Aversions and desires give a lead to the abyss. Wants are sheer unless mingled with body lure. Being selfless is fun, and it's fun to be free. Life on earth grants a test of love and fear. Freedom is devoid of craving and worry. What drives sadness, fear, and smear? Desire only fuels a broader wishful story.
Written: September 24, 2022 Desire And Aversion Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 9/26/2022 7:41:00 AM
You add a wonderful perspective on Desire Lasaad. Relating the overcoming of such feelings. Masterfully written in your unique theme that is to be appreciated by the reader. I enjoyed reading this intellectual marvel of yours. Blessings my friend...
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Date: 9/25/2022 7:20:00 AM
A poem of contrasts. We are all prone to desires.
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Date: 9/25/2022 4:56:00 AM
Being free from desire is a powerful sentiment--not easy for most. Potent thoughts and explorations my friend.
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