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A Morning Awakens

Awakened by the kiss of dawn the softness of her morning light gently nudges the night away The dew drops twinkle on the lawn a bird sings sweetly his delight, his trilling, courteous and gay The garden flowers seem to spring amidst the green they gently sway floral fragrance floats on the breeze The bayou softly murmuring wavering shadows still at play, lost in the depths of cypress trees A squirrel scampers to the ground and across the yard he rushes buries acorns without a sound In the distance a baying hound eager to hunt in the bushes until fox or raccoon is found A horse gallops over a hill enjoying freedom and the sun, he stops, grazing in grassy fields I follow nature and be still watching as the day has begun and early morning beauty yields © 07/29/2019 Tri-Con Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Emile Pinet

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Date: 8/2/2019 8:04:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Alesia. Well done.
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Date: 8/1/2019 11:58:00 PM
I am so impressed with your Tri-Con Alesia. Your magnificent imagery leaps off the page and into my sight as if I were there seeing the scene in person. So deserving of your Third Place win! Congratulations! You have honored my form! xxoo : )
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Date: 8/1/2019 5:07:00 PM
You had me with the first stanza. such a lovely flow through out. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 8/1/2019 11:36:00 AM
I love sitting outside watching morning unfold...i only wish work wouldn't get in the way some days....Congrats on your top win with this beautiful poem :) hugs
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Date: 8/1/2019 10:07:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to nature; your imagery is terrific. Great job!
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Date: 8/1/2019 9:25:00 AM
Congratulations Alesia, your poem earned "Third Place" in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Alesia Leach
Date: 8/1/2019 10:20:00 AM
Thanks, Emile. It would be hard to judge in here. everyone does such wonderful poems. ;0)
Date: 7/30/2019 9:26:00 AM
Your brilliant poem captured my heart and imagination with its beauty and serenity, Alesia. A tranquil yet vibrant feast for the senses that transported me to this perfect scene. Exquisite imagery framed in a beautiful poetry form. Wonderfully done! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you always my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/29/2019 8:47:00 PM
Just to wake up and walk the path of these wonderful surroundings.. Great description leaving one with a serene feel. Good luck in Emile's contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/29/2019 6:29:00 PM
what fabulous imagery Alesia I enjoyed the sights and sounds in your poem. i especially loved the first stanza it is truly beautiful:-) hugs jan xx
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