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A Moments Escape

Take me back in time Open my timeless capsule of your soul Walk down my cobblestoned path decorated with all the memories that made our hearts warm Once again the starlights will enhance our Foolish Hearts Like Cinderella all will end at the strike But, OH what meloodramatic souls we have........

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/9/2008 9:48:00 PM
Thank you for your sweet comments and if there is anything I can do to elliviate your heartache just ask. God bless you Your mother must have been a wonderful person if she is a reflection of you. Micahel
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Date: 11/9/2008 9:47:00 PM
Bonnie I'm so sorry for the loss of your Mom. I wrote a poem about mine dedication of her pass ing two years ago. Write one about your mom and what she meant to you or a specific moment that touched you. I can share so many stories with you I wish I could extend my arms and give you a lving hug. I feel your pain and I know she is in heaven. All Godly women go there. I am so sorrly for your loss I know what I went through. I will pray for you. My email is cubagoldblue@yahoo.com if youwant to vent
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Date: 11/8/2008 5:18:00 PM
I like the lighthearted feel of this poem. The last line makes a good closing. You may want to change bak to back in line one. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/8/2008 4:25:00 AM
Very nice Bonnie. Romantic and touching. Slight humor. Michael Torres
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