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A Moment of Clarity

In a frozen state-- I have a moment of clarity; The universe will hold a mirror to your soul-- for eternity. Nerve impulses forming memories; Crying for a vision-- Are we merely pleasure seeking animals? Reaching out, To make my mark-- my scars slowly fade. Yearning for a walk; A breath of sultry summer air-- Again to start the day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/10/2013 9:00:00 PM
Natalie, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/8/2013 12:24:00 PM
Congratulations!!! NATALIE, nice to see you on Nates' winning list. By the looks of his winners, it seems as if he's a real picky person.... xox~ Linda
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Date: 6/7/2013 8:34:00 PM
thank you
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Date: 6/6/2013 10:30:00 PM
Natalie, Congratulations!!! :-) very dreamy --what I was looking for when it comes to night themes. always & forever Linda.... Goodnight
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Date: 6/4/2013 10:43:00 AM
Natalie, a enjoyable poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/4/2013 9:56:00 AM
a good way to make your mark, allowing the scars to slowly fade away, Natalie. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; and I’m from the humid state of Texas. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Do not hesitate on clicking my name when you spot it on the soup. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Always * Linda
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Date: 6/3/2013 3:31:00 PM
Yearning for sunrises to give us a new sense of purpose. I fully understand this piece. Very well done!
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