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A Moment In Time

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* warm summer evening bright, lovers moon smiles fully ~ gray sky, downy clouds gazing at the moon sweethearts share moments in time ~ soft, doting embrace distance sounds of ships warm water splashes on rocks ~ ocean sings and rolls written on 4/10/2022 Brian Stand Premiere Choice Sponsor: Brian Stand

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/1/2023 5:16:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this. By God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy of Christmas toward a prosperous New Year along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

Mpho Kgaswane

Date: 11/27/2022 10:01:00 AM

Hi Debra this is an interesting poem and caption.

Lynn D.

Date: 10/8/2022 2:39:00 PM

Nice! Good imagery! We'll done!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 9/10/2022 1:34:00 AM

A lovely moony poem with fine imagery painted in words. Kudos! Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 9/8/2022 7:04:00 AM

this is such a beautiful write. Enjoyed it so much Deb. Not sure where you are in the contest but best of luck. Nancy

I Am Anaya

Date: 9/4/2022 2:07:00 PM

Simply beautiful, real poetry Deb. Good luck in the contest! (My caption code was Deb) no wonder why? ~Anaya

Michael Tor

Date: 7/16/2022 3:29:00 PM

What a lovely write and such a beautiful picture of the Sunlit moon. This one is a favorite Debra when will you start posting again we miss your writing? God bless and hope to see you soon...

Susan Lawrence

Date: 6/25/2022 1:47:00 PM

Just beautiful Debra . I was transported immediately to the scene with sights and sounds and ocean air! Blessings, Susan :)

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 6/6/2022 8:04:00 PM

This is such a beautiful poem! This took me to the moments of the past!!!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/30/2022 2:26:00 PM

Beautiful lines make this a very pleasant read.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/26/2022 12:38:00 PM

A lovely write/picture. Love This One. Wish I was on your beach. I also wish you would write more. Have a great/blessed day writing away.................

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/24/2022 10:49:00 AM

Time to wake up and write more! Aloha!

Bill Baker

Date: 4/30/2022 3:12:00 PM

Lovely, romantic evening on the beach. I enjoyed this poem, Debra. Thanks for sharing, Bill

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/27/2022 9:31:00 AM

How more perfect can it be, in love, heads resting on each other, moonlight hitting the lapping waves, clouds gathering letting the moon peep through now and then, and further out where the big ships are, the 'ocean sings and rolls', magic time for lovers. Breathtaking write Debra. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/21/2022 8:18:00 PM

Excellent, Debra, 3 especially.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 4/21/2022 2:48:00 AM

Debra, this is so sweet, such a lovely romantic and beautiful poem <3 God bless you my friend ~BJ

Anil Deo

Date: 4/18/2022 10:50:00 PM

My sister in Jesus Christ, where are u? We knowvyoubgave a family ... Just praying you all are well. We need post-hokuday poems ... Shalom shalom in Jesus