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A Moment In Death

My eyes wide open, all I see is Ebony A white hot Light, to the left : "to the Past" A Heavenly bright White Light to the right "to the Present" I know the path of the past : I live it every day Holding LENORE’S hand entwined to Forever ,Forever Her Heart and mine beating as one for Eternity A Loving Kiss : Heavenly Bliss : Teardrops’ Mist I walk the path to the right, toward the Heavenly Light The mirage I see, behind the White Light, unhued colors, unformed shapes I quicken my pace and run toward the place where I can see LENORE again She sits there , braiding Her long auburn hair , Emerald Eyes glistening with tears “LENORE” ; whispered from my mouth , why so sad; we are together again Forever She puts Her finger to my lips “shh my Heartbeat My LOVE, My LIFE , ALWAYS You are here only for a minuscule of time, You have to go back It is not your time” We embrace I feel the warmth of Eternal LOVE : a Heavenly glow on Her Angelic Face We kiss, memories of a distant past flood my mind I remember the sweetness of her lips LENORE fades away: No , NO , Noooh then I awake to the glare of Hospital lights Shimmering off the tears streaming down my cheeks

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/13/2012 8:06:00 PM
This was an amazing one. Couldn't take my eyes off it. The beginning enveloped me with ebony in my mind, and I could almost feel your pain through these awesome words. Another favorite. Always, Laura
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Date: 3/4/2009 8:39:00 AM
The emotion comes through your words in a heartfelt and vivid way. You have eternal love and one day you will be together again. Blessings to you for sharing your words with us. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a good day. Karen
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Date: 3/3/2009 9:14:00 PM
It's sad that we have to live with such pain, I missed reading your beautiful words, I hope all is all right...Raul
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Date: 3/2/2009 8:23:00 AM
astral projection! Just remember now you know how go more often and come back. Light & Love
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Date: 3/2/2009 5:02:00 AM
This bring tears to my eyes, which now fall. Such a beautiful write, such a beautiful moment with your love. Selfishly, I am glad you are still here, but you now know, like you always have, she waits. So wonderful to read your beautiful words again, and to know you are healing. Your love is immortal. But your life is a gift to many. With much love and big hugs, Shar xoxo
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Date: 3/1/2009 8:06:00 PM
This breaks my heart but makes me happy as well to know that this kind of love could be real. Nice job HGarvey
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Date: 3/1/2009 6:19:00 PM
HG, this is the finest thing you've ever written. I'm so glad she was there with you..if only for a moment. Its so good to have you back..I'm so sorry for all you've gone through. Barbeeg.
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