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A Moment In , Space

I went deep into space First I stepped on Venus I met the Roman goddess Goddess of love and beauty Calming its deadly surface Helping me survive So, I can visit, Mercury My morning and evening star Giving me air it never gives So, I may breathe and visit , Mars Putting excitement in my space My, deep space My space of dreams Dreams coming true Has , I stand on , Mars A place full of rivers,streams, lakes and even oceans I wanna sleep , on its highest mountains Admire its deepest canyon Jumping straight to, Jupiter Known as, Zenus in , Greek mythology I'm going to dance and sing Stay there for days To much to explore The biggest planet in our solar system Very stormy So many different cloud formations Over here the sky becomes the ocean For this sight is amazing So amazing it is So many moons In this deep space I will never forget As, I'm off to ,Saturn Let it spin and spin Take me for a ride Let me sleep on your rings Floating in time Floating to, Uranus Lord of the skies and husband of earth It's freezing cold, ice all over All , I can do is leave Visit , Neptune A planet discover in 1846 Along with it's big white cloud But, the wind here is extremely strong Causing me to land on , Pluto Putting me to sleep, away from deep space So , I can make it home on , Earth

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Date: 10/11/2012 6:10:00 AM
Wow...excellent!You have great imagination!
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Date: 10/8/2012 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Deep Space" contest Delilah. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/6/2012 11:57:00 PM
wow, you put a lot of work into YOURS, Delilah. VERY good one and big congrats in the contest.
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Date: 10/6/2012 11:57:00 PM
Long time, no see, how are you, sweetie?
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Date: 10/6/2012 2:13:00 AM
well-done poem friend Delilah. Congratulations!! :)
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Date: 10/5/2012 5:30:00 PM
I like how you wove Mythology into your poem ! Good write, enjoyed !! Congrats on your win !!
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Date: 10/5/2012 4:24:00 PM
DELILAH, congratulations with your awesome poem in Nathan's "deep space" contest.. enjoyed~ xox~pd
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Date: 10/5/2012 3:48:00 PM
thanks for the support' nate
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