A Moment

The day is oh so quiet. The sun has not come up. But I can see it peeking. The world awaits it on its throne. Everything is still. No one is running about. What a perfect time for poetry… Before my brood is up. Beautiful. Serene. A cup of coffee near by. A moment out of time. Within this cocooned moment… The world is all mine.

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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 11/15/2014 12:42:00 PM

Wow yes awesome! CONGRATS! That's exactly the time i get to take to poetry, i adore n relate to how u say when 'our brood isn't up' yeah as mother hens we get only some time for poetry eh. Dis was creative! Hey i just found out my plcin in child fables,! Warmest regards. Fond Thanku.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 11/10/2014 6:58:00 AM

In this piece you cherish Peace and Tranquillity, lovely. Nicely done.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/9/2014 4:21:00 PM

you painted such a peaceful picture Carol many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Skat A

Date: 10/9/2013 11:34:00 AM

Carol , nothing I love more than embracing mornings with beautiful words and imagery. Congratulations love ~ SKAT~

Ralph Taylor

Date: 10/3/2013 9:52:00 PM

Excellent, Carol. Great write. Nice going. Ralph

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/2/2013 9:43:00 PM

CAROL, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my "Morning Due <--not DEW! Contest. SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL- Thanks for the awesome imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem "The Letter". Enjoy my latest blog! "Daybreak" if you like:) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15983&PoetID=18720 **LINDA**

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/8/2011 2:48:00 PM

Congrats Carol on a dynamic win with this wonderful write for the competition.luv..

John Freeman

Date: 10/8/2011 11:57:00 AM

I enjoyed your lovely poem Caro. Keep sowing and I'll keep reading. Smile. Agape, Moses

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 7/14/2011 12:58:00 PM

Congratulations Carol on your wonderful poem winning in the contest. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/29/2011 5:54:00 AM

Congratulations Carol on your win in the "Any First Year Poem on PS" contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol

Cory Long

Date: 6/28/2011 5:47:00 PM

so happy to see you in the winners circle congrats on your fine win my friend cory

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/28/2011 2:58:00 PM

Congrats Carol on another amazing win in Brian's contest with these excellent words of Free Verse luv..

Cory Long

Date: 5/26/2011 7:53:00 AM

this sounds like a great start to a wonderful day nicely done .cory

Kacey Greenlee

Date: 5/25/2011 9:22:00 AM

I like this very much.This sounds just like the way I start off my day.Thanks for your comment on my poem.''A daughters' Truth''.Have a great overcasting day....