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The poem unfolds as the artist meticulously paints the bride, unveiling her inner turmoil and distress through his artistry. The bride's facade of forced happiness and concealed emotions is masterfully depicted by the artist, who captures her internal struggles and foreboding sense of loss. The poem's imagery and symbolism convey the bride's profound emotional state, reflecting the artist's ability to encapsulate her pain and sorrow within the portrait. As the painting progresses, it becomes a poignant representation of the bride's unspoken fears and the absence of her fiancé, ultimately serving as a melancholic homage to her wedding dress and the shattered expectations of marital bliss.

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A bruised heart scorned, sacred vows of a saint, sorrows of unrequited lovers—art is what you paint—I Am Anaya A Models Likeness Hues of magentas and white acrylic silky spells Vibrant colors mixed from his palette he evokes Swept over again ‘til emerging shades of eggshells He has an ability to convey a sense of deep melancholy and yearning in much of his work Thus, the reason she chose him furiously, at first for whatever it took to capture her in what she is to atone for, her fate to be. With bated breath the artist brushes swirling strokes A finished background, now ready for her face sedate A statuesque quality she provokes More lugubrious than usual, she tells him she sat up late worrying her fiancé be held up on the way The model has been helpful he thought to himself although she stood very still for him, all day. He paints her salient gown next, her pose engaged Her smile feigned, lips swollen red, from biting he detects A glance of an earlier sketch traced of her enraged He hides it while diluting color to match her pale skin Languid and weak holding back her tears, she summons him to begin again. Her inner likeness fails to appear, still he proceeds Rest and ease your mind What do you hear? The renowned realist artist pleads Think of times when life was kind She protests it is no use, tells him to let it be, He agrees, lifting his brush and with its pointy end, he then turns her head slightly, thirty degrees Back to the canvas a figure now transcends. A husband’s absent journey down the aisle leaves her alone but with a phantom kiss A soul rendered vacant from callous guile A portrait of doom gazing into an abyss What would’ve shown through paint; pain and sorrows The artist knows what needs to be done, none the less Lest what may have been in the lover’s tomorrows, ‘twas the painter's blissful ode to her wedding dress.

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Date: 12/6/2023 11:18:00 AM
Wow!! I am truly speechless. And how did i miss this precious poem, i just love how descriptive it is and how it flows in such artistic eloquence. You really have an artistic soul and i see that here too through your wordplay. I especially love the fact that you’ve somehow made dark look beautiful. Pleasure reading this. Congratulations
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Date: 12/6/2023 9:06:00 AM
Nice showcases poem.
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Date: 12/6/2023 9:57:00 AM
Thank you, Jay!
Date: 12/6/2023 6:18:00 AM
An excellent choice for the contest, so many brilliant verses through the poem with a great selection of words.. Great choice for the contest dear.. Congratulations on having your poem showcased..
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Date: 12/6/2023 9:57:00 AM
Written through the eyes of a painter who sought a beautiful spirited face, instead a countenance melancholy and broken likeness. The only solution left, the image of her gown. Thank you, Silent One! I enjoy supporting your contests. ~Anaya
Date: 4/17/2023 3:22:00 PM
A lavishly haunting lament, yet melancholy and offsetting. The assuming bride inexplicably abandoned at the altar, sadly awaits her dubious destiny. A great read, Robert
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I Am Anaya
Date: 4/21/2023 8:45:00 AM
Thank you, Robert! I'm working on imagery and description, more or less a guru--painter, formed--hint of a spiritual guide.
Date: 4/13/2023 9:40:00 AM
I enjoyed this story/write/picture. A pretty wedding dress. Have a blessed day writing away..............
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Date: 4/13/2023 3:56:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed my poem Paula! Stunning isn't it, I love this painting. Thank you

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