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A Mistake of Time and Structure

It was forty by the thermometer The moon closed in It was a cold and numbered day If I remember It was time to waste If not It was a memory And there it faded It was thirty by the numbered meters The sun slipped away, fell out It was a full end, imagination in space If I remember It was a gifted part of nothing If not it was a clock And there it stopped It was twenty on the speedometer The wind gave up It was time with space giving way If I remember It was a place called winter If not it was a thought conjured That blew away It was ten by the odometer Morning came to night It was a place to park If I remember It was a slower moving body If not it was a part of darkness And it had passed into sleep It was one by the nonometer The mind froze up becoming zero It was a full stop in mid air If I remember It was a cold and numbing moment If not it was a motion forward And there was nothing there It was zero by the underometer And night filled in the void It was a cold and numbered day If I remember It was a matter of time If not it was something in the dark And there it stayed

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Date: 4/27/2014 11:07:00 PM
Congratulations on the fine win with this lovely write, earl
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 4/28/2014 6:14:00 AM
Hi Dr. Mehta. Thank you. Have a great day. Earl
Date: 4/27/2014 2:41:00 PM
Hello Earl, nice win... , I have a fun blog for all my winning poems. Stop by and enjoy IF YOU LIKE. Just in case you don't know which blog belongs to this particular contest. Here's the link, http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=22228&PoetID=18720 Drop by and leave a smile. Hugs ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/27/2014 2:55:00 PM
Good Afternoon Linda. Thank you so much! Have a great day. Earl

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