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A Mirage

I look with scorn at this abomination; Bringing to light a passion, an angry flame Fueling a yearning I struggle again and again; A relationship we attempt, With bright affection I taste your tender inner soul, Colorful bloom I cherish you; Oh, but you Bamboozle me! A mirage, brought on by snow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/3/2013 2:33:00 PM
Like a conjurer you brought out the essence at the last moment, lovely write.
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Date: 12/10/2012 11:14:00 AM
Congrats Melani...Seren
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Date: 12/10/2012 5:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your HM Melani xx
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Date: 12/10/2012 12:34:00 AM
Very cleverly done Melani! I like how you've brought out the deceit, a mirage. Well done!
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Date: 12/9/2012 1:46:00 PM
M U,... love the "Dictionary fun" here.... Congratulations (-: always~&~forever :-) PD
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