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A Message To Major Tom

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A Message To Major Tom

Of all the melodies that bind
To me, your spaceship solely chokes
The lot with raving roars. Though mind
You if your circuit’s dead, then how
And why do you still sing and find
A way to thence return into
My head? Instead, you’re left behind
To sing to all the lonely stars.
Though father still you’ll float away
With steps and leaps for all mankind.

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  1. Date: 10/23/2009 6:10:00 AM
    Interesting thoughts. Keep writing. Sara