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A Message From My Mother

A Message from My Mother In a dream I saw my mother welcoming guests into her home. She had been expecting them and had been busy preparing and organising everything. She rushed to greet with open arms and led the way through the hall and into her rooms. She didn’t see me or look at me at all as I watched, a silent witness. Her guests followed fully assured that they would be looked after, at home in her presence. Knowing just what to say she turned to speak, words I couldn’t hear, words that weren’t meant for me. As she spoke she smiled, and as she smiled she turned, her hair revealing some of her face. She looked youthful and happy, but that’s not what grabbed my attention. The most amazing beautiful soft white light radiated from her face. Her face, her skin, shone translucently. ‘Now I know what an angel looks like’, I thought. Again she turned. Again I was granted the grace of not only seeing my mother’s face again but of witnessing all God’s love emanate. No star could shine as bright. No angel could compare. The depths of this light went to Source. O Joy! A glimpse again, only partial but always the same white softness and depth. 'In God's house my mother dwells. She welcomes all her loved ones and leads them home. I look forward to the day she looks my way. .... my mother, God's Heavenly Hostess'. by Jean McLoughlin Winning Second Place in Nayda Ivette Negron's "Angels" Contest 1/1/2016 A Note from the Author In this poem I describe a dream I had about my mother who sadly passed away many years ago. But what I don't mention is that I had this dream the same night my Auntie (my mother's sister) had a tragic accident and passed away soon after. My Nanny (my mother's mother) and another Auntie (another of Mum's sisters) who had been suffering from cancer, had just been buried. My mother was the oldest of 12 children and this poem was passed to all my relatives to let them know that she's there waiting to welcome them. I take great consolation from knowing that I will see my mother again. My mother opened the door that night, not only to her guests, but to my writing as well, as this is the first thing I ever wrote. It was written in loving memory of my mother and her deceased mother, brothers and sisters, family and friends. Thank you for reading. From Jean

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Date: 1/8/2016 3:52:00 PM
This poem is beyond beautiful. I have similar dreams of my father sometimes. In them his skin, too, looks so full of light, no impurities...touched by angels now...
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Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/8/2016 3:59:00 PM
Susan, thank you for sharing your dreams with me. We have something special in common, dreaming about our loved ones is such a gift and may we have more of them often. Love from Jean
Date: 1/6/2016 12:48:00 AM
Jean, Congratulations on your win. LINDA
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Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/6/2016 5:03:00 AM
Oh thank you Linda
Date: 1/5/2016 5:50:00 PM
Hi Jean, I was hoping to see a new one from you soon. SKAT
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Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/6/2016 5:00:00 AM
Thank you for the gentle nudge SKAT. I was a bit afraid and embarrassed, didn't know where to start.. all that. Thank you for helping me. Love from Jean
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Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/5/2016 6:11:00 PM
I've just posted one now SKAT
Date: 1/4/2016 1:07:00 PM
Sorry Jean. I thought when I got a message from you about that poem that you had seen it in the contest, which is no where to be found. I was asking what had happened to the contest. But I guess it was withdrawn, I cannot find it. Sorry for confusing your comment. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment and please keep entering your poems on Soup. Love, Joyce
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Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/5/2016 4:29:00 AM
Oh it's fine but you're right Joyce, come to think of it I was wondering about that contest too! Hope it hasn't been withdrawn, maybe it just has it's maximum number of entries and is still going ahead. Good luck anyway in this and all other contests. Love from Jean
Date: 1/4/2016 11:04:00 AM
Excellent this is...congrats Jean
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Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/4/2016 11:57:00 AM
Oh thank you kindly White Sage
Date: 1/3/2016 11:31:00 PM
JEAN, Congratulations on your "Angel" win. **SKAT**
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Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/4/2016 4:49:00 AM
Thank you so much SKAT! So kind of you! Love from Jean
Date: 1/2/2016 7:45:00 PM
WOW!! this is wonderful, Jean. I hope you put it into that one angel contest?? It is such a splendid way to discuss one's mother. Oh, I just looked down and saw that you DID win in the contest. BIG congrats.
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Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/3/2016 10:11:00 AM
Oh thanks Andrea, I think I must have just got it in in time, I had the dates for it all wrong. I'm very pleased and so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks again. Jean
Date: 1/2/2016 2:24:00 PM
Mother's are the first angels that God gives us for our protection. Lovely write. Love, Joyce
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Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/2/2016 2:58:00 PM
Wise words, bless you for your kindness and goodness. Love from Jean
Date: 1/1/2016 8:48:00 PM
Congratulations Jean.
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Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/2/2016 12:33:00 PM
I'm so sorry Nayda, thought this contest was later in the month, had no clue why you were saying congrats, what a pleasant surprise! V pleased!! Xx
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Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/2/2016 4:53:00 AM
Oh thank you Nayda, great to meet you! Hope u hav a v happy new year! J
Date: 1/1/2016 9:57:00 AM
A beautiful Message, Jean... I love how you shared this poem, it's a precious write. I was moved by the line, ‘Now I know what an angel looks like... Love SKAT
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Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/1/2016 12:57:00 PM
Oh thank you SKAT, it is a very personal one, a message of hope that I'm happy to share!

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