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A Memory of Snow

It's the first snowfall of the year And it takes me back.... I remember the first time I rode her in the snow, So afraid she'd slip. She didn't want to go out But we both needed some fresh air and exercise. Her ears laid flat when she saw the saddle. She was not impressed. I think she had hoped I was just bringing a treat. The snow wasn't deep. A few wayward snowflakes, stragglers, Were still falling. So I saddled her and off we went. Avoiding paved roads Where she would be more likely to slip. We stayed to the dirt road running past the house And a few familiar trails. I believe she aimed for low hanging boughs. I was covered in snow in the first twenty minutes. My punishment for this silly idea, I guess. Soon her ears picked up and her step became more sprightly. She, too, was getting into the spirit of it. Only an hour, then back to the barn. No falls, a couple minor slides in footing Which she handled like a pro. There I brushed her down And she attacked apples with a renewed appetite. The next day the rain washed it all away, Except for the memory..... it remains.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/11/2011 9:46:00 PM
Very pervasive descriptiveness here. It has been a long time since I rode a horse.
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Date: 11/24/2010 8:34:00 AM
Wow, what a nice picture this paints. Riding in the snow on a sure-footed horse can be a refreshing and invigorating experience. A lovely and well written story, Francine - thanks for sharing. Joe
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Date: 11/23/2010 6:20:00 PM
Lovely flow of words Francine.. making the snow so inviting luv.. enjoyed ..
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Date: 11/21/2010 3:21:00 PM
Lovely story Francine, as I read I could picture your words, just wonderful as always >> James :)
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Date: 11/21/2010 9:18:00 AM
You have told an enthralling story in this write, Francine
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Date: 11/20/2010 8:12:00 PM
Excellent story, Francine. Enjoyed. Thanks for your kind remarks. My poem doesn't qualify for the contest - too long and not funny- but thanks for the thought. Have a great weekend. xxxRalph
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Date: 11/20/2010 2:48:00 PM
Very nice Francine, always a pleasure to flow with you through your poems...always Michael
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Date: 11/20/2010 11:46:00 AM
A nice poem story about her, what a wonderful thing to have closeness like that which these beautiful regal animals.
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Date: 11/20/2010 11:00:00 AM
Nice one,, enjoyed your write,..p.d.
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Date: 11/20/2010 10:55:00 AM
a finely-written, intricate story that enthralls me no end, francine! thanks for coming around to comment on my pensee... warmest, nette
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