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It was not enough that you hurt my soul, Your unfeelingness broke my heart; Words like a thousand swords leave me broken. You hide behind a mask of sweetness. Your true "self" I can now see. ____________________________ July 13, 2015 Verse, unrhymed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/29/2015 5:20:00 PM
very powerful write indeed, my friend. Boy, I have so much catching up to do - forgive my reading some of your poems at random. I know you're snowed under - no worries at all if you don't leave a comment for me. Love to you & the kitties x
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Date: 7/13/2015 5:19:00 PM
deeply scribed, constance.. betrayal always hurts...i liked this a lot.. huggs
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Date: 7/13/2015 3:55:00 PM
Hmmm, might you tell me who this is? I enjoyed this, Constance.
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Date: 7/13/2015 3:55:00 PM
A lot of these kind out there!!!
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