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A Marriage and a Death

A Marriage and A Death Girl lives a mystery, While dead had lead a history. Bride see a beautiful dream, her groom on a white horse, ready to give her what all she wants. Dead see a dream, To be buried where fountains are near coffin, To be greated by flowers often. Bride gets married, and to the house of groom she is carried. Here, the flowers have left the pot, A journey begins, to meet the god. Let’s do some prepration said both, This is the only similar thing said the dead lady taking an oath. We both are having sindoor, Lots of jwellery and solemn phool. The conflict that makes us different Is, You wear a saree colouring red, And me white, I am off to bed. You are also separating from your family members, Same as I, Its a bit grumble. You were also picked up by men of same height, Same as I, And the difference was of red and white. Bride mrs. Brawn was taken to the home of mr. brawn, And the dead reached a place, Where land was brown. Finally guests welcome the bride, And members near the coffin cried.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/29/2016 1:32:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Jasleen. :)
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Date: 5/22/2016 3:56:00 PM
Jasleen, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Jasleen Sodhi
Date: 5/23/2016 1:08:00 AM
sure skat... lets be friends..thanks for ur wishes... i wish to grow more.. :)
Date: 5/22/2016 7:47:00 AM
Jasleen,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Jasleen Sodhi
Date: 5/23/2016 1:09:00 AM
yes ! its such a soothing environmnt here indeed... i would like you to guide me at evry inch... thkyou for ur support linda :)

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