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A Man of Your Own

A Man Of Your Own The day is filled with echoes of olden time In shadows of pain- I watch the skylark climb Into the sun so far above the grain In fatherly love, my son I think of you again Oh father, life is too short to contemplate a mysterious journey to learn one's fate New adventures waiting to be discovered not existing to be smothered or mothered Son, in your life when pain starts to break, In clouds of dark- This wise advice please take Remember this, in the short of it all Help comes from each sincere heavenly call I'm leaving now - there are roads one must travel explore the world - hidden mysteries to unravel Like my brothers - every bird leaves the nest life is a journey - one must master to be the best Your dear brothers have done our family proud, Finding silver linings in every dark cloud Son, now time comes- For you to do the same Add goodness, pride and honor to our family name Thank you father - I will return to my family tree remember me in your prayers, while I roam free Look after mama and always remain content I will never forget the times, together we spent Collaboration between Robert Lindley and Silent One This poem is about a father speaking to his son, before he is ready to embark on his journey into the world on his own. This is the first part of three poems. 17 December 2015

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Date: 1/19/2016 9:39:00 AM
Robert, you and Silent One have penned a well written collab. This is great of example good relationship with father and son. It is filled with alot of love and wisdom. Well done. I'm off to read part two! -Alexis 7
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Date: 12/19/2015 12:08:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem by two brilliant poets, a poem every father and son should read, Peter is like this with our grandson that lives with us, but I think these days you can talk more openly with kids than when our own children were young, but anyway he has a good relationship with our boys. this poem says it all....Take care........Vera
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Date: 12/18/2015 10:35:00 AM
Love this Robert and Silent One. Enjoyed reading...
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Date: 12/18/2015 4:08:00 AM
Very nice cohesion between your verses. Well done, gentlemen.
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Date: 12/17/2015 8:00:00 PM
I could scarcely restrain my tears... a simply sublime poem of hellos and goodbyes inextricably blended. I look forward to the other pieces. Well done Robert! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/17/2015 8:38:00 PM
that's 'goodbyes and goodbyes...'

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