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A Man of Few Words

A moment in time, time to realize just who I am & where I stood in life. To look into the eyes of my mentor & watch him as he cried. Tears of Honor, Respect & Pride My proudest moment in life, was telling my Pops, I had joined the Army. Letting him know I was ready to fight. Standing there with a stupid look on my face, I wasn't sure just what he'd say. I thought he would be angry but he seemed to be okay, Blinking my way, past tears of my own. Trying to show him, I was brave. I said, "It's Time for me to leave place, time to leave where I was, raised. As he wiped away a tear running down his face, he turned to me and said, "keep your head low & your spirit high make sure you come home safe.. On the morning I left, he shook me in bed, then said, "Don't forget what I told you keep you head low & your spirit high make sure you come home safe". then he turned and walked away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/18/2008 3:18:00 AM
Dear David, This touched me very deeply. Congratulations on your win in Mark's contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 8/17/2008 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations David on your Honorable Mention in Mark's contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 8/17/2008 12:50:00 PM
What a emotional example of a memory containing the depth of love. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Mark's favorite moment contest. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/7/2008 6:28:00 PM
What a beautiful, life-moment to share with us - this was so touching, and real - I loved it. You are a brave man, and I thank you for fighting for this great land - and a poet to boot! Right on. Blessings, Kristin
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