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A Man In the Rain

Cinnamon whiff dives on my sill and raps a music of wind chimes. Pearly the rain, trickling, until she drapes the windowpane. Air mimes the balmy drift frosting twilight, a magic to be shared. I might just wake you now, then— dream by while tip-taps croon a lullaby. More globules fall beneath a cloud to spill incense from its downpour with hums filling the lane. Aloud charmed songbirds’ notes begin to soar; that on my own, feet rush outside as smoky dew brushes my glide. Ears blushing from heavenly rain unknown to me, my manhood slain! Dated 11/16/2013 Fragrance of Rain hosted by Nette Onclaud From Franco Gonza

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Date: 11/25/2013 9:15:00 PM
Fantastic imagery and form, Franco! Love the last line...congrats!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/23/2013 4:06:00 PM
Exciting winning work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:10:00 AM
hi Franco congrats on fine win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/19/2013 9:36:00 PM
Franco, , Congratulations on your beautiful FRAGRANCE OF RAIN poem... Hugs ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/19/2013 8:32:00 PM
wow, Franco, you have the gift of poetry. Amazing imagery and writing in form. Congrats.
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Date: 11/19/2013 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Franco
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Date: 11/18/2013 2:40:00 PM
An excellent poem Franco..So glad i stopped by
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Date: 11/17/2013 12:54:00 AM
Franco, deep and sweet in a way and sound.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/16/2013 7:34:00 PM
thank you, franco...:) huggs
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Date: 11/16/2013 9:46:00 AM
Smiling! " your manhood slain" is a wonderful phrase. BG
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Date: 11/16/2013 8:50:00 AM
Beautiful take with a wonderful form rispetto, Frank
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Date: 11/16/2013 4:22:00 AM
Reminds me of Gene Kelly's "Singing in the Rain" and I just feel your manly joy. Such a melodious piece wonderfully designed!
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